文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺。
My new teacher is Ms Wang. She is our Chinese teacher. She is a little bit heavy of medium height. She is really good at teaching us Chinese by making her class active and interesting. I really like her handwriting which is beautiful and her good voice. When someone asks her questions she always explains patiently. She loves every student as her child. She is always be ready to help us without any complain.