作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
It is not unwisely to make out conclusion immediately when you see and hear. Why I think this is the truth? Because it's from my experience at my childhood. Things sometimes are not like what they appears. When I was 8 years old and stand on the street which nearby my home. A man suddenly caught me and then hold me with his arms. I shouted and thought that he was the men who wanted to kidnap me. He tried to interrupt my crying but it was useless. After crying for a while, My mother came and told me that he was my uncle who had gone to America 6 years ago. He said that he had came back for 2 days and wanted to give a surprise just now. So, the things happen in our life may not as you think at the beginning you see and watch. You should analyze know more about them. May be it's different from your conclusion at the beginning.
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