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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:2007
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

Recently,a reserch showed that more and more people chose to travel to some beautiful places.just like computer becomed popular and travel also becomed popular.I think there are many reasons about that. First,people have a lot of press in they work and family,and they need to relex.Then travel is a good way to relex themselves,of course travel can open they are eyesight .Second,people become richer than before,so they have money to spend on other way expect for living and food.Also,they may be just follow others people,who want to travel around the world. It is obviously that too much people go to the city cause some inspact.some interting place had a lot of people made it be destoried,and it cause some bad effect.Importantly,people throwed garbage here and there,so environment had problems,such as water pollution and air pollution.I just want to say we should protect environment when we enjoy the fun of travel.

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