作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
It is not unwisely to make out conclusion immediately when you see and hear. Why do I think this is the truth? Because of my childhood experience. Things sometimes are not like what they appear. When I was 8 years old. I stand on the street which nearby my home. A man suddenly caught and held me with his arms. I shouted and thought that he was the man who wanted to kidnap me. He tried to interrupt my crying but it was useless. After crying for a while, my mother came and told me that he was my uncle who had gone to America 6 years ago. He said that he had come back for 2 days and wanted to give a surprise just now. So, the things happen in our life may not like you think at the beginning you see and watch. You should analyze and know more about them. May be it's different from your conclusion at the beginning.
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