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2000年1月英语四级作文真题:解决上大学的费用

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:37浏览次数:2687
要求:
  Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education? You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.     上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决
  2.     哪种途径适合我(说明理由)
用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Every year, a number of teenagers are admitted to universities. Most teenagers never worry about their tuition for the reason that their parents support them all the time. Nevertheless, some parents can't afford their children tuition, because of their tight buget. How can them get enough money to pay the tuition? In fact, there are many ways to figure out the issue. First, students can get financial assistance from their relatives, who are well-off. Second, when they are free, they can do part time jobs to earn money. Last but not least, what a prevalent way is that students can get a loan from banks. Among the three ways, I think the second way is most suitable for me. I hold the point that doing a part time job not only can earn money, but also can make me learn more about job market.

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