小学一年级英语作文:My dog

文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I have a brown thin dog. Its name is xiangxiang. Its hair is curly and grows fast. It always want to go out to have some fun. Running in the yard，meeting some friends，jumping and barking，etc. I follow him watching everything what he love to do.When he feel tired he will jump into my arms.