高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My home town is located in the east of China, It is famous for cultivated rice and fishery. When I was child, 30 years ago, there was a blue sky,clear water ,and frash air. though people had have a hard time, they worked hard to plant their farm , and they kept a simple and happy life. Nowadays, farm become the mordern farctorys,More and more people leave their farm and turn into the workers. They have a better material life than ever, but abandon the heavier pressure. We can see a viarity of cars in the streets, people feel convinence that the industrious develop lead to. but blue sky is decreasing, Water is polluted, how to protect our environment become our the most important thing.