2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活，但有个别拼写错误。

Nowadays, an increasing number of people enjoin to celebrate western festivial, from my point of view, there are several reason for this phenomenon. First and foremost, with the development of our society, people comunicate with foreigner have risn and they have many foreigner friends, it also can be said, influence of those people. Moreover, celebrate the foreigner festivial is the trend of the society, it is the signal of fation. But the coin has tow sides, it can cause the traditional culture be destraid. In other words, we should protect our culture.