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i have many friends,but one of the best with me.we are to be friend have 7 yeas .sometime, i think we are the most of known each other.she has long hair ,big eyes and perfect figure.she is very clearly and interested .she is good at sing ,i think her will be a singer,but her do not like to sing on the publish .she has some shy.many people is like her ,because most of the time a good friend will try to settle disputes between partie before them aloofness.all as we known ,things occur between friends,like jealovsy,aloofness,is not fresh.but we are be at good friends on forever.