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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分45.0分
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作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写方面也要加强。

用户练习作文:

i think living in the rural area is better than in a city which full of people. in my opion,the rural area alway have fresh air and passional people and you can do anything you want which you can not do in the city .for example playing in the film,eating the fresh vegtable and so on ,or maybe you can feed a little dog or cat in your house ,you will set in the yard ,and see the moon and the film ,all that things you can not do in the city ,cause it is very .

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