高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is football,When I was a student in grade 4,On the occassion, I picked up the football which was thrown out by someone on my way to go home from school, then I played this football with my classmates.From then on,I start to prefer to play football.I got a lot of happyness and friendship by football training and game with my classmates. My favorates football star is Beckenham from English,He gave me deep impression as a great football player.My bigest dream become a professional football player.