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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36980
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;请注意分段。

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I have many friends,but one of the best with me.Our friendship for over 7 years.I believe we are the most of recognize each other.she has long hair ,big eyes and perfect figure.She is extremely smart and loves clean .She is good at singing, we all think that her voice is very nice. But she have shy, don't like to sing in a public occasion.Many people are willing to make friends,because most of the time a good friend will try to settle disputes between partie before them aloofness.as we all know ,things occur between friends,like jealousy,aloofness,is not fresh.However, our friendship has such as the first good, never because of a misunderstanding and joh .I am so happy that i have a nealy friend.

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