高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

文章组织结构良好；文中词汇使用较丰富，但高级词汇使用太少；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。

Please allow me to introduce some informations to yours,we will treal in the city of name Nai Jing Nai Jing lie in the China of southeast,it is a big city.There are more than 5 million people and have 2400 years history.Many people want to travel in there because there are many beautiful places take the fancy of people.such as XuanWu lake,city of stone and so on.