语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可增加从句的使用量,注意个别的句子错误;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
i am a introvert person, so i don't have so much good friends. so ling is my only good friend, we have growed up together becauce we are in the same village.ling is always the most tall girl in my class from primary school to high school . not only tall she is also a nice beautiful girl which make me envey her.we are close when we are at school ,but since we gratituded ,we were apart for ecah life, we haven't seen each other a long time, i miss her.