小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；应增加文中从句的使用；文中有几处拼写错误，应增加高级词汇的使用。

It's september, a new term has begun. In this term we have a new engilsh teacher ms Cheng who i like her very much.She is a very young girl who just graduated from academy,with bright eyes and there is smile always on his face,which make she looks so nice. She has a funny way of teaching english that makes my classmates and i all eager to have her classes,in the class she often use some funny way to help us to remember the new words, for example: hero ,ms Cheng said you could remenber the word on this way: o means the sun, the sun for "her" is means hero,very interesting is'nt it? with the new teacher ms Cheng help, I beileve i will make a great progress on english.