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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
【高频词句】
1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，单词拼写要认真；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；部分句子偏简单，注意有错误的句子；连词使用偏少。
I am HuBin and now i will tell you something about this product . What the advantage our products have are their price .You know we have many excellent wokers ,so the quality of our product is very good.And the instruction of our product I will send to you later. We all want to establish a good business relationship with you. Sincerely, HuBin
