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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22907[网页划词已开启]
要求:
某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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作者要注意增加使用高级词汇,单词拼写做的挺好;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Good morning, everyone. I'm glad to have the chance to introduce my beloved hometown to you. In the northwest of GuiZhou province,laying a lovely city called BiJie. It's not only the city where I was born, but also the only place I've never been able to leave 2 years ago, I moved from there to ZunYi to begin my senior high school life.the day I left that I felt as a fish out of water. East or west, home is the best. Wherever I go, I just can't forget the delicious food called LiangGao in my hometown but called LiangFen in ZunYi. Boiling it with SuanCai, bean sprout and special oil peppers is an unique way in my hometown. Maybe you are thinking, What? Boil? and suancai?It must be a darkness food!Well, I am sure you won't have any problem falling in love with it when you smell it in person. What's more, my hometown is famous for Baili Azaleas where is known to everyone. But, today I want to introduce another marvelous place, JiuCai Plain. You can take a cable car to get the top of the mountain that is full of purple leek flowers that looks like a small Provence France. Its altitude is 2900 meters so it's the ridge of roof of GuiZhou. Smelling the scent of JiuCai flower,touching the breeze, caching the fine views, emptying your mind, you will think the nature has special power to make life and the world so wonderful. Around the JiuCai plain, forming a special culture called A Xi Li Xi by Yi people. The Torch Festival is the most important event to them. If you go to my hometown BiJie, you can't miss them. Maybe someday I will have to leave this city ,but no matter where I would go I will never forget this city, its people, its trees and its sunrise. Yes, everything that it gave me could be given by other places, but my love won't be changed, because it's my hometown. Thanks for your patient listening. Thank you.

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