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It's a busy day for me.Today is Sunday,my mother was got to a tirp with my dad.So I have to spend the weekend myself.My mother told me that clean the room and wash the plane before them come back.But today morning my sister Lili was illnessed.I should take care her.I cook some food for her,clean the room and wash the plane that before my mom and dad come back.In the last,I must doing my homework,because tomorrow is Monday. Today is the busy day.