注意:
1.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
2.邮件首尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数;文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Now I’ll show you my vacation how like. First, I got up early and did sports as usual. This is good for my health . Then , I helped my parents do some housework such as cooking and washing . I also took the great chance to read books , especially some famous novels .At last, I was a volunteer to help farmers with some farm work and helped the cleaners clean streets. My mother bought me cake which is delicious for the reward In my opinion, it is useful for me to learn quite a few experiences as have a good time in the vacation.
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