2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章能够较丰富地使用学术词汇，可是文章用词太过单一；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

nowadays,there is a social trend --when you get high degree,you can find a good job and get a more wage.As follow the chant,we can see the doctoral degree gets 1551$ ,bachelor's degree can gets 1053$,but the less than high school diploma gets 451$. It is obvious that knowledge is power. And many people think of that if you have a higher degree ,you will earn more money. however,some people have another ideal ,they think when you have a good technique ,you will get a job . As follow as me ,i think you have higher degree ,you can get a good job,and earn more money .As well ,you will not do some manual labour .