2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

The technology has developed a new relationship----the relationship between man and computer.And this relationship is becoming more and more intimate and inseparable. Computer has simplified our work and life,even taking care of our daily living just like a housekeeper.As a result,we are getting more dependent on our "housekeeper".There comes problems.First,because of the heavy reliance on our computer,our human being are losing some basic living skills,such as calculating,writing.It means the ability of our brains will be generated,which I think is quite terrible.Second,our actual social relationship will be taken place by the virtual relationship to some extent.My sisters and friends always talk to me through QQ even when we are in the same room.Maybe it is interesting and our conversation will not be heard by the third person.However,nothing can replace the face-to-face talk,because the computer screen have no emotions. Above all,computer can be our good friends as long as we can take good use of it,rather than being taken charge by it.