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In sometimes,when we seen or hear some thing,we can make a summary at time.however,it is not inteligence.this is the reason:in the one spaces,when we seen or hear something,we don't know the essence of the happened things,i only know the surface of the thing.so we can make a wrong decesive.in the another space,i don't know why this thing can happed.so we couldn't make the decesive at time when we seen or hear something.
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