拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;过渡词和衔接词不饱和,文章行文较为流畅;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩。
There is no doubt that everyone should be kindness. However,more and more people want to make a good job. They can use any ways to achieve their goals. Recently,a boy who is my classmate want to be g good man. He is so cute and handsome . I look forward to receiving the information and meeting you in person.
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