2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；熟练使用了一些长难句；文中词汇多样性稍有欠缺，单词拼写也要更仔细；请注意分段。

With the development science and tecnology,the world become more and moer small,at the same time,computer is a very important role in people's life.As we all know,there have a lot of things which we want to do,must dependent on computer,such as talking online,check emails and so on. Computer becaome more and more important in our daily life,it makes the world more well,all of the people who live in the world can talk if you want.In our business life,it can helf solve so many problems.