拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;衔接成分偏少。
There no doubt that everyone should be kindness. However,more and more people want to make a good job. They can use any ways to achieve their goals. Recently,a boy who is my classmate want to be g good man. He is so cute and handsome . look forward to receiving the information and meeting you in person.
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