2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词。

Welcome to my hometown MeiZhou.There has more and more interesting thing and more and more beautiful place. Let me try to tell you something about MeiZhou.There has a place call "Lei Shan" ,a rivel . When I am a child ,about 5 or 6 years old, I study swim with my father in the rivel.The water clear and cool .And more tree around the rivel ,so beautiful