2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查。

This is a humorous subject for us,many a lager numebers interesting place in china,such as theBeijing,QingDao,DaLian,Tianji and so on. but the most interesting place,i will introduce visit BeiJing,because the BeiJing not only with history of 2000 years,but also is a capital of China and attrative many tourisms comes from a home and aboard.