2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Zigong,A small city in south of Sichuan province.There're many of traditional things ,such as solt culture and dinosaur museum.Moreover,The buddha culture is also famouse for all over the china. The solt culture is so old ,it's can be went back to qing Dynasty/it's originated from qing Dynasty.All ZiGong citymen depend on marketing solt for a living.The most important is that ZiGong people invent the method of produce solt ,and the invention deeply impact chinese development history. The dinosaur museum is located at where the dinosaur is founded.there are much dinosaur bone ,we can learn much knowledge of dinosaur,For example,the kind of dinosaur ,why and when dinosaur is extincted,then you will found these exprience is impressive and useful. buddha culture spread all over the china ,Zigong have the third big buddha all over the world,As the advertisement of the buddha,more and more people visite here to learn this traditional culture.