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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33573
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
评语:

作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;文章组织结构良好。

用户练习作文:

Original meaning of “enlightenment” is opening ignorance, studying knowledge and understanding the truth. In ancient China, as young we are, if we want to be a gentleman, we must go to the private school, otherwise we are ignorant. It said that the enlightenment depend on your intelligence in the future. During the process of human being’ society transition from traditional to modern, with the enlightenment, we believe no enlightenment no modernization. However, the modern discourse enlightenment came from the modern western. In human history, modern enlightenment thought and the Enlightenment began in late 1600s in British, afterwards which was spread to France, Germany, other European countries and North America. In 1800s, modern enlightenment thought and the Enlightenment was propagated in Japan, China and other Asian countries. Thanks to the West with Locke, Smith, Voltaire, Rousseau, Diderot and others enlightenment thinkers, the West appeared Industry Revolution, market economy and constitutional government system. In China, since a modern enlightenment in the late Qing dynasty and under the background of “salvation”, Chinese intellectuals reformed Chinese traditional culture and shaped new citizens with Western modern times, which leaded up to Westernization Movement, the Reform Movement of 1898, the New Culture Movement, etc. In 1978, argumentation of “ practice is the sole criterion for testing truth” vastly emancipated personal mind and brought great achievement of “reforming and opening up”, which show that the power of thoughts. For a long time, there is a popular misconception of the Enlightenment that the foresight of intellectuals and inspiration and education of philosophers were enlightened. So "enlightenment" has become a verb and its object means savage. According to the explain of Kant, the essence of enlightenment is not “enlightened” but“ in the absence of guidance and ego state awake, which is void of application of reason”. The insights are brightness of rationality. In the West, the Enlightenment comes from people’s cognize of objective law. Such as Copernicus' heliocentric theory, Newton' gravity and Galileo' cosmology, which believe the whole universe abide the same law. Their thoughts broke religious restriction and introduced rational thought to human being society, creating a new era of enterprising. In China, thousands of years of the feudal agricultural society resulted in the technology behind and lack of legal traditions. China was influenced by the Enlightenment, China introduced into the concept of science, democracy and rule of law, beginning with the world civilization due to influence by the modern western enlightenment thought. Today, China is extremely accessible the Chinese nation’s great rejuvenation than at any time in history. More and more country realized the “belt and road” is not China’s monologue, but the cantata of nations and people. We will realize “Chinese Dream” rely on every Chinese’s profound of subjective and objective world and self-consciously rational development.

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