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My hometown is Zigong, a small city in the south of Sichuan province. There're many of traditional things, such as salt culture and dinosaur museum. Moreover, the buddha culture is also famouse for all over the china. The salt culture history is so old, it could go back to qing Dynasty/it originated from qing Dynasty. All ZiGong cityzens depend on marketing salt for a living. The most important thing is that ZiGong people invent the method of produce salt, and the invention deeply impact chinese development history. The dinosaur museum is located at where the dinosaur is found. there is much dinosaur bone, we can acquire much knowledge of dinosaur, For example, the kind of dinosaur, why and when dinosaur is extincted, then you will found these exprience is impressive and useful. Buddha culture spread all over the china, Zigong has the third big buddha all over the world. As the advertisement of the buddha, more and more people visit here to learn this traditional culture.
