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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40891
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇量积累不错,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

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In the modern days, all the people seems to be busy with everything, so they tend to come to a conclusion or result in no time. However, it is unwise and can lead to faults. As the old saying goes, never trust your eyes. What you see is probably not what you think is like. What you hear is not like how you understand as well. The truth is often hiden under the surface and needs us to think through the whole thing to get it. Sometimes, the truth emerges the surface after a long time and if you come to a conclusion at the sight of the phenomenon, you are definetely wrong. When I was at the high school, one of my classmates always fell asleep at the class, and the teacher got angry and blamed him for not learning. I came to a conclusion at once that he was a bad student and looked down on him. After the teacher called his parents, we knew that his mother got sick, his father was not at home and he needed to look after his mother after school, then he did his homework till midnight, thus he got exhausted and fell asleep in the class. From that moment, I realized that we should not come to a conclusion instantly based on what we see. This behaviour could do harm to other people. We should see more, hear more and think more. Even we stick to that, we may probably be wrong, but we will get closer to the truth.

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