英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 留学> 托福> 模拟题> 托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3302
要求:

作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

Many films are adapted by books. There is a question to confuse most of people that which is the first step you want to watch. In my opinion, I would like to watch movie first. Firstly, people always need to find freshness from the constant exploration. Most films are less than 2 hours, therefore it’s too short to display all the details of the books. In fact, if the details could not be showed or changed, you will disappoint on it. For example, I was already read the books of “ASSASSINS CREED” before I watch the film. So when the assassin kissed the girl, I cried in heart “Oh, no it’s not that what the book exactly described.” After that, I feel too boring to stay at the theater. This film is not what I want to see. Secondly, in contrast to the book, the film has more attractive to people. People more likely to spent their time on movies, because movie is more vivid and real than books. For example, we all known the famous “HAMLET” , but how many books of Shakespeare do we read. One of the main reasons is that this book is arcane. If you watch the movie first, then you will know the main topic, the whole story and the tragedy ending. Then you may make decision whether or not to read the book. You can do more things in limited time.

会员评论0个评论)
ariel_7856
金币:55

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:88.5bless9

人气:63发布:2016-03-11

得分:88.0滴水穿岩

人气:52发布:2013-08-19

得分:88.0yanglulu3333

人气:71发布:2013-11-06

得分:87.0jxfjc

人气:18发布:2016-06-18

得分:85.5xiaoxilifuwei

人气:46发布:2014-02-11