Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。
The digital life Nowadays,it has become apparent to us that increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life. but every thing like coin has two sides,using mobile phone also has positive and negative sides. With the rapid growth of using mobile phone,it has become increasingly important in our daily life. some people even feeling scard without mobile phone. some people using it with family and friends which living far away,they can send messige ,voice call and video chat with each other whenever miss their.many students in elementary school have their own phone,it is convenient to get in touch with their parents when they need help.but, there have some negetive points of using phone.first,overusing phone is bad for our health especially for eyes. second,overusing phone made us lack of chat with other face to face,digital communication do not sincerable at all.third,more and more net liar make money through phone. in a word,it is benefit to using mobile phone but we should use it moderate.
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