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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71633
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;从句数量偏少,且文中有几处句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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How are you ? it is so lucky that we are cooperate so long time . Thanks for your trust and you willing to have a new order . please check the new quote . When you see the new quote maybe will have some confusion that why the price is increased . please give me a chance to explain it . you know ,i calculated cost again and discover if we do the same price ,we will be sustain losses in business . This year , the cost of raw material and packing cases and logistics increased a lot . i believe that you can understand me and don`t want to see us sustain losses in business . you are our one of best old customer , i should give you a discount , but we can only bear less profit not to sustain losses in business . if you have any thoughts , please tell me . Communication can solve any problems .

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