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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71659
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。

用户练习作文:

How are you? It is very lucky we have worked for so long . Thanks for your trust and you willing to have a new order . please check the new quote . When you see the new quote maybe will have some confusion that why the price is increased . Please give me a chance to interpret it . You know that I have calculated cost again and discover if we do the same price ,we will be sustain losses in business . This year , the cost of raw material and packing cases and logistics increased a lot . I believe that you can understand me and you don`t want to see us at a loss . You are one of our best customer , i should give you a discount , but we can only bear less profit not sustain losses in business . Provided that you have any thoughts and don't hesitate to tell me . Communication can solve any problems .

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