复杂句使用不错,句法规范;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些
With the development of information techonoly that has been offered more and more convenience for us,such as scan the information in the Internet and so on. At the same time,some phenomenon has been attracted the attention. For example,more and more people has been started to read the ebook. About this phenomenon,some people thought that it is easily for us to read what I wanted.Others believe that ebook will instead of the traditional book. The reason for this statement is that a large number people pay attention to ebook in the internet and do not like to read the traditional book,result the ebook has been prevailed in the modern society.In my opinion,it is both a challenge and an opportunity for the book market. At the end, I want to said that with the development of information techonoly,the society will be change and make people lived comfortable and convenice.