2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

To receive your is going to my hometown is exciting for me,after last had seen,we are apart many years.So this time,we will to go to my hometowns where are very interesting and you not visit,I will take you a wanderful tourism. At my hometoun,have many interesting place,what is most interesting place is Wine captain of Ren Huai