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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句数量偏少；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。
Nowadays people frequnently use computer and cellphone to communicate with others. This communication method bring advantage and disadvantage to us. On the one hand, we can save lots of time to do other things. it's really convenient. On the contrary/Instead, it sperate people from their friends and families, their face-to-face communication reduce sharply. If everyone express their emotion by the computer, they will lose many things, I think it's unworthy. This picture tell us that a parents take care of their daughter only through the computer, even through the daughter is playing on the upstairs, eventually, the parents have to pray her to eat. It's really crazy, I don't feel a little love and respectation during them, this is both a deletion of education and a poison of computer, all the word, people should use the computer reasonablly or it will become a sword in our life.
