2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

从句数量偏少；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

As a middle school student，it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers. But how to build the relationship? Some student hold the view that we should get along well with teaches in our daily life. We can make friend with teachers. Obey rule will also give our teachers good impression. While other students think high scare is enough. If our test is good, teaches will be more satisfied . They will be proud of us and achievability. In the process, we will establish a good relationship with them. In the end, I suggest student and teachers could increase communication to make our relationship better.