题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
With the development of the society, more and more high-technology products emerge and they make our life more colorful and convenient, especially the computers. With the computers, we can contact with friends and relatives at any time and any place. We can not only listen to their sound but also see their face. The computers make the world a real earth village and even though we are very far away from some people, it is like thar we live near each other. In addition, we can know almost everything with the computers. The only thing we should do is typing some words in the checking box, and we will get the answer we want. However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides. The high technology also do some harm to us. Take the computers for example, many youngsters get addicted to the computers. They spend too much time in computers to care about people around them and they lose interest in studying. Also, because they stay always indoors to play with the computers, they don't go out to exercise any more. Their fitness will get worse and worse. Therefore, we should take full advantage of the computers to facilitate our life but don't get obessessed with them.