2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

文中用词灵活多样，但要注意增加使用高级词汇；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Dear Dad， How is everything going？Mom told me that you are always so busy with you work that you don’t pay much attention to your body condition. As your daughter, I’m worried about your health a lot. Thus, I am eager to give you some advice. For your working place is not far from home, it’s good for you to walk to your company instead of driving or taking a bus. What’s more, I strongly suggest that you should take exercise at least once a week in the gym where you can play tennis or swim. Meanwhile, it’s of great importance for you to eat healthy food everyday. At last, I sincerely hope you don’t stay up too late and take my advice from now on. Your loving daughter, Mona