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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9041[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇使用较丰富,但拼写检查要重视;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

The greastest use of my life "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it", Which is a famous saying as we all know. From my yongth, parents always educate me to strive for a signaficant life. But what I will do to make my life more meaningful? With the development of society and technology, Chinese environment become more and more serious.So I insist that protect our environment will make my life more significative. On the one hand, a clear environment can help people live a healthy life. On the other hand, only build a good environment, can keep our country to the route of sustainable development. To sum up, environment is closed to everybody. Protecting our environment is essential to humen life. So I think invlove myself to environmental protection is a great and meaningful thing for my life.

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