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The greastest use of my life "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it", Which is a famous saying as we all know. From my yongth, parents always educate me to strive for a signaficant life. But what I will do to make my life more meaningful? With the development of society and technology, Chinese environment become more and more serious.So I insist that protect our environment will make my life more significative. On the one hand, a clear environment can help people live a healthy life. On the other hand, only build a good environment, can keep our country to the route of sustainable development. To sum up, environment is closed to everybody. Protecting our environment is essential to humen life. So I think invlove myself to environmental protection is a great and meaningful thing for my life.