句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇使用熟练,但拼写错误要注意;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
The greatest use of my life "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it", which is a famous saying as we all know. From my youth, parents always educate me to strive for a significant life. Nevethless what I will do to make my life more meaningful? With the development of society and technology, Chinese environment becomes more and more sereve. Consequently I insist that protecting our environment will make my life more significative. On the one hand, a clear environment can help people live a healthy life. On the other hand, only build a good environment, can keep our country to the route of sustainable development. To sum up, environment is closed to everybody. Protecting our environment is essential to humen life. Thus I think involve myself to environmental protection is a great and meaningful thing for my life.