2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If was her visit my hometown who is my foreign friend , I feeling very happy to her. what is coming to visit my hometown ,there is that is the most interestingpiace in the prevous what is my brithplace.it is famous as hot snake food in the world and has celebrity panda basicment . what is more , people is passion to enjoy having guests . As far as I am concernd ,I am looking forward to my foreign friend to visit my hometown.