2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章层次清晰分明，但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文章词汇表达不够丰富，且请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

If was her visit my hometown who is my foreign friend, I feeling more than happy to her. what is coming to visit my hometown, there is the most interestingplace in the prevous what is my brithplace. it is famous as snake food in the world and has celebrity panda base. what is more, people are passion to enjoy having guests. As far as I am concerned, I am looking forward to my foreign friend to visit my hometown.