2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

文章词汇表达丰富，不过请增加高级词汇的使用；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

It brought people so much trouble. It cause the cough to the weak people.There were more accident beause driver could not see clear on the haze days.It also stop people from outdoor activities. The outdoor PE classes must be stopped. In order to avoid the haze weather, we should try not to pollute the world. Such as try to use the public transportation instead of driving a car. It is a good idea to go on foot. Stop using the cars that in bad condition. The factories that pollute our envionment badly should be closed. If everybody act right now, I'm sure the haze weather will be in control, and our world will be more and more beautiful.