2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

According to the chart ,we all can know that more education pays caused higher earnings and lower unpoyment rate in 2001.And from current population survey,we see that average median weekly earnings was $797 and the average umployment rate was 7.6 %. So we can canclude a canclussion that education is very importment for both person and society . Why did education pays have so great influence on unemployment rate and median weekly earnings ?It is due to the fact that more education pays ,a higher degree one will possess,as a result ,one can find a good job easily.once people could be employed easily ,the unemployment rate will fall evidently . As far as i am concerned ,every country government should pay more attention and money to education .Only by this way can people live a rich life .what's more ,the society will be more peaceful ,nation will become more powerful.