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There is a old saying that "it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket". Diffrent people have diffrent comprehensions about it. For me, I hold that this saying has two meanings. The fisrt one, I guess, is that it tells people too many eggs are too heavy so that the basket can't burden the whole weight. So as human beings, if we put ourselves into one thing for a long time, then we will feel tired and we are impossible to succeed. For example, I spend the whole night reviewing my math, the result is prabobly that I get tired of math so my efficient is not high. In the meanwhile, I don't review other subjects. Oh, it's really bad.The second one, of course, we shouldn't wish for only one thing, but every aspect of our life. Oniy seeing one thing may make us become a person who can only master a simple thing. On the contrast, if we try to see diffrent things, we will win.