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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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可适当增加几条从句;文章用词灵活多样,但请注意增用高级词汇,单词拼写还要加强;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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There is a old saying that "it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket". Diffrent people have diffrent comprehensions about it. For me, I hold that this saying has two meanings. The fisrt one, I guess, is that it tells people too many eggs are too heavy so that the basket can't burden the whole weight. So as human beings, if we put ourselves into one thing for a long time, then we will feel tired and we are impossible to succeed. For example, I spend the whole night reviewing my math, the result is prabobly that I get tired of math so my efficient is not high. In the meanwhile, I don't review other subjects. Oh, it's really bad.The second one, of course, we shouldn't wish for only one thing, but every aspect of our life. Oniy seeing one thing may make us become a person who can only master a simple thing. On the contrast, if we try to see diffrent things, we will win.

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