2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇量积累不错，一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活，有个别拼写错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

Ladies and Getenlmen, we will share a story of Climbing Mountain which was orgaized by Xing Guang High School. The classmates climbed the Daqing Mountain on 10th April. It was so active for all of the pupil at the beagaining of Climbing Mountain. There were many lively memoraries in this jourey. Tired as everyone was, they gave support to each other. People in increasing number climbed the Mountain during the end of period. It is use doing some activities for schools' students in contemporary era. I deem that studets can learn certain knoledge which can not initiated in the class.