2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者高级词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Ladies and Getenlmen, we will share a story of Climbing Mountain which was orgained by Xing Guang High School. The classmates climbed the Daqing Mountain on 10th April. It was so active for all of the students at the beginning of Climbing Mountain. There were many lively memoraries in this journey. Tired as everyone was, they gave support to each other. Individuals in increasing number climbed the Mountain in the course of the end. It is so necessary that schools should hold some activities to keep students' fit. I deem that studets also can learn certain knoledge which can not initiated in the class.